Say sum thin 6 first draft- Come and see the show… step right up -Serita

10 Jan

Come and see a show…The class of 2014(Circus music blaring)Roll up Roll up!

The school security lurks everywhere they stalk their prey but now the circle of life upon the savannah goes on…The beasts they are the hunters looking for fresh meat to make a kill they hunt in packs looking for long term workers, those being brave and standing in for the weak , sick they are the hyenas laughing profusely picking off the smallest weakest wilder beast.

You say all the children transform! (Sung)We say they you say I say the children transform.WE ALL SAY: IT’S THE NORM.

They come in at year 7 with their little squeaky voice saying miss (said quietly and meekly)And by the time they reach year 11 they talk like this (Deep voice)

Come and see a show! It’s all one we know… have written script been the actors, directors, and bowed for the curtain call.Fantasies voiced out loud of hitting their keepers of those who dare to cage them!Keep them caged!  In a place where they pace the room longing for freedom

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The devil himself now can’t redeem them! They say you can’t teach an old dog new tricks you can’t teach young people old tricks they are wise they have the knowledge of a thousand Wikipedia pages. 

They KNOW what life is going to be like but they are like generations long gone aspirations of money and fame right? 5 minutes in the limelight? Or was that orange light? Or liliac, or magnolia and steel?

You say all the children transformWe say you say they say…WE ALL SAY: IT’S THE NORM…

I am sexually active! A mammal announces! To the rest of the pack! They all laugh and cheer! Then continue to talk about parties J.D and beer…The evolution has stayed the same only the date upon the black oh I’m sorry! WHITE board has changed…Teenage kicks right through the night has turned to day to weeks to months to years to 6 hours internal truancy amongst the rebels is rife the desire in the youth to open the vortex’s of their matter are nil and void!

Disruption on a riot scale is all around no fear exists of anyone WE DO WHAT WE LIKE! I doubt even for god (or Jesus) himself.WE ARE THE BEASTS OF OUR SHOW…We know what we know! 

We talk to you how we like! We are in our OWN union we are permanently on strike!Come and see our show… I guarantee you will be amazed!




5 Responses to “Say sum thin 6 first draft- Come and see the show… step right up -Serita”

  1. The words Canvas January 10, 2014 at 1:35 pm #

    Hahah omw! ….. I’ve got teenagers and they certainly are a handfull! But…. I simply adore them! I can’t imagine my world without them…….I loved your piece! Enjoyed reading it. Even smiled! Visit my site please? Read some of my work,,


  2. The words Canvas January 10, 2014 at 1:36 pm #

    Visit my site 🙂 loved your piece! Haahah I’m a mom! Love my teenagers

    • mouthypoets February 13, 2014 at 11:09 pm #

      Hello! Thanks for reading – on a train at the moment but will hop on your blog asap and ask our Placements to do the same – they do most of our blog looking and sharing to the group 🙂 Thanks so much!

  3. Anne January 11, 2014 at 1:37 pm #

    I love the energy in this, and I second the feedback you were given in session, stick some specifics in the form our experience in school, some god, some bad. I love the idea of you being e ring leader in the circus

  4. Anne January 11, 2014 at 1:38 pm #

    Argh typos! Stick some specifics in there from your experience at school, now and when you were at school yourself, some good some bad.

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